Manimala River

The cold morning air caressed the old cottage while the balmy rays of the sun struggled to break through the mist. Beneath its rusted tin roof, Raman’s body swayed gently, the rope creaking in the silence.

Nearby, the Manimala river lapped at the banks, as usual. It had seen death before. It may see it again.

Suicide? The villagers shook their heads without a clue. Raman was a man of the world, who was strong, loud and full of vigor. If death had come for him, it had not come by his own hands.

Then, the rumors began.

An old woman, her back bent with the weight of carrying long years and secrets, spoke first. Raman had seen something unexpected that night. Papan, a daily laborer and Maya, the daughter of a rich landlord, got tangled in forbidden love inside the cottage.

Their love, now a curse upon the village.

If anyone found out, Maya’s family would be disgraced. Her father would definitely cast her out. Papan would be driven away — or worse.  

Had they silenced Raman to protect themselves?

Soon, something very sinister crept into the whispers. The tin cottage.

No one entered it after sundown. The elders knew it was cursed. Long time ago, another man had been found hanging inside the cottage. The village had buried the memory, but the cottage had not forgotten.

A fisherman casting his net that night swore he heard Raman scream. Not a cry of struggle, but something worse. A scream of horror, of knowing. As if he had seen something he was never meant to see.

That evening, as the last rays of sunlight sank into the river, an old man muttered under his breath, “The cottage takes what it wants.”

Even the parish priest, who had long avoided such talk, finally broke his silence.

“Years ago, when the first man was found hanging… they said he had seen something by the river. Something that walked on two legs but was not a man.”

The villagers shivered at the thought. Even their eyes avoided the cottage. Something whooshed through the withered sidings of the cottage— though there was no wind.

Did Papan and Maya kill Raman to keep their secret?

That night, the river rose in a heavy downpour, swallowing the banks — and the tin cottage.

By morning, Papan was gone leaving his footprints at the water’s edge.
The villagers never bothered to talk about him again.

Once in a while, in the dead of night, when the wind howled through the trees, someone would hear the slow creak of a rope swinging — though the cottage no longer existed. Sometimes, a shadow flickered on the river’s edge even when no one was there.

The river watched and waited. But it never gave up its secrets.

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